Forum:Character Page Improvement

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Guardian Soul Talk. — Then I shall make you see... That your hopes are nothing. Nothing but a mere illusion! - 23:17, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Alright, so since we're all going to be improving character articles, this is the place to choose which articles you're going to be working on. Try not to pick too many at once, just take a few at a time. When you're finished, let me know either here or on my talk page, and I'll go over it to make sure that everything is done in the proper fashion. All articles should have a great introductory paragraph, and the sections should be done in the following way: Journal Entries Story Personality Appearance Fighting Style (If necessary.) Origin (Make it brief, with any non-Kingdom Hearts related material linked from Wikipedia. We don't need to know every event that goes on in the films, just describe the character's first appearance and roll.) Trivia Let me know which characters you'll be working on below, and I'll make a list of who is doing what.

EO

• Hercules
• Hades
• Megara
• Philoctetes
• Pegasus
• Rock Titan
• Ice Titan
• Auron
• Pain and Panic
• Leon
• Yuffie
• Tifa
• Sephiroth
• Cloud

GS

• Alice
• Queen of Hearts
• White Rabbit
• Card Soldier
• Doorknob
• Cheshire Cat

Yer mom

• Tarzan
• Jane
• Clayton
• Kala
• Kerchak
• Terk
• Sabor

LevL

• Jack Sparrow
• Will Turner
• Elizabeth Swann
• Captain Barbossa
• Undead Pirates

Discussion

Eternal Nothingness XIII - I'm not afraid of what the darkness holds now. Even if you do wrest control of my heart from me, even if you cast me into the deepest, darkest abyss, you'll never sway me from the one cause that pushes me to keep on fighting. Whatever the cost, I'm ready to pay it. TALK - There's darkness within me... So what does that matter? I know I'm strong enough to hold it back. — 23:22, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Oh, dammit! I beat you to it... but two times the fun, I guess. I'll handle : Halloween Town characters Lion King characters Space Paranoids characters Deep Jungle characters And that's it for now. We aren't redoing Donald, Mickey, Goofy, etc., are we? Those lengthy pages would be a bit of a hassle for one guy, wouldn't you say?

Guardian Soul Talk. — Don't I even warrant a hello? It's such a shame. The Organization used to be the rope that bound us together. - 23:25, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Whoa, don't you think that's a little much at once? Just take a few specific characters for now and see if you can handle those first.

Eternal Nothingness XIII - The three of us can never be torn apart, all right? I'll always find a way. TALK - When I really need you, Ven, I know you'll be there. — 23:28, October 8, 2009 (UTC) Look who's talkin', "Mr. 90 Uploads per Minute"! But ok. Let's start with the Halloween Town Characters for me.

Firaga44 - Bye...Sora. TALK - Sometimes I wish to escape reality that ain't happening anytime soon.... I'd love to help with i don't think i can help with it i'm not good at writing details.*mutters to self*i hate being being useless.

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! Can I help with the Port Royal characters?

Yer mom - SOMOS HOMBRES O PAYASOS!!!! TALK - 18:27, October 13, 2009 (UTC) I'd like to help too so I'm adding myself up there with Deep Jungle characters ñ.n

I guess I would want to help out with Beast's Castle and Dwaf SWoodlands characters hwn I have the time, however since many of the Dwarf Woodlands characters' roles are still not clear, I will just pick the sections I know best about each character.- Qlwjeremy I'm sorry... I don't feeel like helping now................- Qlwjeremy

Actually, I wanto help now, but I will just pick the character pages one by one and edit them. -Qlwjeremy

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! I tried to improve Jack Sparrow's page. Is it good, or does something have to be changed? If it's not good yet, I'll try to make it better.

Guardian Soul Talk. — Don't I even warrant a hello? It's such a shame. The Organization used to be the rope that bound us together. - 20:04, November 8, 2009 (UTC) The opening paragraph needs to be re-written. Opening paragraphs don't need to include the origin, they just need to explain who the character is and what their role is.

LevL Fear my mighty instruments! Is it better now?

I'm SUPER new here but I noticed a mistake on Xemnas's page and if I edit it I don't want to screw it up. In the Trivia where it said that "Xemnas, Saix and Luxord" were the three Nobodies that Yen Sid showed to Sora, it's Xemnas, Saix and Xaldin. At least, that's how it is in the Americanised version. Please let me know if I'm right or not.-SweetNothingness --True, we don't have hearts, but we remember what it was like, that's what makes us special. 13:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, its me. Remember me? the guy that does nothing? well thats gonna change. Starting with this. What will you have me do? Number XXI 22:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Hey, Maybe we could add little videos or pictures of the limits for party characters. Not to downplay any vivid limit descriptions, but like they say, a pictures worth a thousand words! Number XXI 02:12, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Eternal Nothingness XIII - I'm not afraid of what the darkness holds now. Even if you do wrest control of my heart from me, even if you cast me into the deepest, darkest abyss, you'll never sway me from the one cause that pushes me to keep on fighting. Whatever the cost, I'm ready to pay it. TALK - There's darkness within me... So what does that matter? I know I'm strong enough to hold it back. — 22:10, November 17, 2009 (UTC) I've switched to Olypmus Coliseum characters, as they had yet to be taken, and I was in an "Olympus" editing mood today. They just seem easier for some reason. Count on Halloween Town being my next project, however. As for the Coliseum, it's 3 down, 6 to go.

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... Oh, yeah! I saw those. You did a really great job on those!

Eternal Nothingness XIII - The three of us can never be torn apart, all right? I'll always find a way. TALK - When I really need you, Ven, I know you'll be there. — 10:52, November 18, 2009 (UTC) Why, thank you!

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - Don't worry. You might forget about me...But, with our promise, I'll come back. You're welcome!

Number XXI - Prepare to scream! TALK - Best holiday wishes from Jack Skellington, the Pumpkin King! um, Anyone listen to what I said?

All right. I'll do Beast's Castle and Dwarf Woodlands characters. -Qlwjeremy

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... We also need to start put info on the characters that appeared in 358/2 Days and tell them of their role. Same thing for the worlds.

Should the MOS be modified too ? Helping others always comes before asking others for help. • TroisNyxÉtienne — 23:49, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

NinjaSheik - All of this might have started with a lie...But I'm really am glad that I could meet you... TALK - One day, the light-it will be ours, and it will bring us together. Til then, I'll be in your heart... MOS?

Manual of Style, in case we are modifying the format already preset there. Helping others always comes before asking others for help. • TroisNyxÉtienne — 23:55, November 25, 2009 (UTC)