Forum:Notes 08, (KHIIFM, Cutscenes) - ShardofTruth

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This translation was made by Xeeynamo for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.
For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the Theater Mode page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --ShardofTruth 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


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Item_2383.png AS IF! Item_2383.png The world is garbage! CRUNCH!
Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png Its a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png Okay, I added the Japanese original text next to the new cutscenes (found here), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand.
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from here) and now there are only two things left do to:
  1. Validate the translation
  2. Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles.