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*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 1st day: Twilight Town|ロクサス第1日:たそがれの街}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's first day: The town of twilight|ロクサス第1日:たそがれの街}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Mysterious enemies appear|謎の敵現る}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Mysterious enemy appears|謎の敵現る}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The enemy attacks|追いつめた敵}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The cornered enemy|追いつめた敵}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade appears|キーブレイド出見}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade's appearance|キーブレイド出見}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Key vanishes|消えゆくカギ}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|A vanishing key|消えゆくカギ}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Photographs of memories|思い出の写真}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Photos of memories|思い出の写真}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 2nd day: Reality in movement|ロクサス第2日:動き出した現実}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's second day: The stirring reality|ロクサス第2日:動き出した現実}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The dream that will become the Key|カギとなる夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|A dream becoming a key|カギとなる夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The usual awakening|いつもの目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Always awakening|いつもの目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|We'll go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Let's go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The promise to Hayner|ハイネと約束}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner and a promise|ハイネと約束}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The story of a party-time job|バイトの話}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The story of jobs|バイトの話}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man once again|謎の男、再び}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man, again|謎の男、再び}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The munny disappeared|消えたマニー}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The vanished munny|消えたマニー}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 3rd day: Differences|ロクサス第3日:すれ違い}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's third day: A disconnect|ロクサス第3日:すれ違い}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream encounter|出会いの夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of an encounter|出会いの夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The laboratory's light|研究所の光}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The light of the laboratory|研究所の光}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Walking from the illusion|幻の目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Illusion awakening|幻の目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The letter Hayner left behind|ハイネの置さ手紙}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner's left-behind letter|ハイネの置さ手紙}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl disappeared, an enemy appeared|消えた少女、現れた敵}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl that disappeared, the enemy that appeared|消えた少女、現れた敵}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Decisive battle at the plaza|広場での決戦}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Plaza showdown|広場での決戦}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Station of Awakening|目覚めの園}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Station of Awakening|目覚めの園}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade|キーブレード}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Keyblade|キーブレード}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The giant looming shadow|迫り来る巨大な影}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The gigantic, looming shadow|迫り来る巨大な影}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}'''
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:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Missing|すれちがい}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|A disconnect|すれちがい}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}'''
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the decisive battle|ロクサス第4日:決戦の道}}'''
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*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the showdown|ロクサス第4日:決戦の道}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}'''
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}'''

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Forums: Index > Ansem's Computer > Notes 08, (KHIIFM, Cutscenes) - ShardofTruth

Okay, this translation was made by Xeeynamo, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize.
For the new cutscenes I took the description and the old title from the Theater Mode article, but there is still one cutscene missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years?
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --ShardofTruth 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)


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Item_2383.png AS IF! Item_2383.png The world is garbage! CRUNCH!
Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png It's a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png Okay, I added the Japanese original text to the new cutscenes (found here), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand.
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ShardofTruth Once you believe, truth and lie are quite the same thing. — 23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Game Clear Data KHRECOM.png Okay, I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from here) and now there are only two things left do to:

1. Validate the translation
2. Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles
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