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! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ||
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*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's first day: The town of twilight|ロクサス第1日:たそがれの街}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Mysterious | :*'''{{nihongo|The Mysterious enemy appears|謎の敵現る}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The enemy | :*'''{{nihongo|The cornered enemy|追いつめた敵}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade | :*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade's appearance|キーブレイド出見}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|A vanishing key|消えゆくカギ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Photos of memories|思い出の写真}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's second day: The stirring reality|ロクサス第2日:動き出した現実}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|A dream becoming a key|カギとなる夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Always awakening|いつもの目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Let's go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Hayner and a promise|ハイネと約束}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The story of | :*'''{{nihongo|The story of jobs|バイトの話}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man | :*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man, again|謎の男、再び}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The munny | :*'''{{nihongo|The vanished munny|消えたマニー}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's third day: A disconnect|ロクサス第3日:すれ違い}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream encounter|出会いの夢}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Dream of an encounter|出会いの夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The laboratory | :*'''{{nihongo|The light of the laboratory|研究所の光}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Illusion awakening|幻の目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Hayner's left-behind letter|ハイネの置さ手紙}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl disappeared, | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl that disappeared, the enemy that appeared|消えた少女、現れた敵}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Plaza showdown|広場での決戦}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Station of Awakening|目覚めの園}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Keyblade|キーブレード}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The gigantic, looming shadow|迫り来る巨大な影}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|A disconnect|すれちがい}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the | <!--I IZ TOTES HERE--> | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the showdown|ロクサス第4日:決戦の道}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Their goal is...|彼らの目的は…}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Their goal is...|彼らの目的は…}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Organization XIII gathering|XIII機関集結}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Organization XIII gathering|XIII機関集結}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Organization's agenda: The hero of light/The Plans|機関の思惑:光の勇者}}''' - ''At the [[Castle That Never Was]], in | :*'''{{nihongo|The Organization's agenda: The hero of light/The Plans|機関の思惑:光の勇者}}''' - ''At the [[Castle That Never Was]], in '''Where Nothing Gathers''', several Organization members discuss [[Sora|the Keyblade master]]. Showing promise, [[Xemnas]] orders the other members to pursue Sora.'' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Beast's Castle 1: The Beast's dilemma|ビーストキャッスル1:ビーストの異変}}''' | *'''{{nihongo|Beast's Castle 1: The Beast's dilemma|ビーストキャッスル1:ビーストの異変}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The voice echoing in the castle|城に響く声}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The voice echoing in the castle|城に響く声}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|"Everybode. Hang in there!"|仲間のもとへ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|"Everybode. Hang in there!"|仲間のもとへ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry, your highness!|王様、ごめん!}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Sorry, your highness!|王様、ごめん!}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the hidden stage/An Old Friend|隠された舞台へ}}''' - ''An unknown figure clad in an Organization XIII cloak enters | :*'''{{nihongo|To the hidden stage/An Old Friend|隠された舞台へ}}''' - ''An unknown figure clad in an Organization XIII cloak enters '''Ansem's Study''' and downloads data from the computer to a disc. After obtaining the data, the unknown figure heads under the '''Heartless Manufactory''' to the [[Chambers of Repose and Waking|Chamber of Repose]], where he greets an "old friend". | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The truth of the Room of Sleep/The New Headquarters|眠りの部屋の真実}}''' - ''[[Xigbar]] discusses with [[Zexion]] the Chamber of Sleep, saying that he eavesdropped on many of the conversations and even heard a voice that differed from Xemnas's once. The scene ends with Xigbar talking about [[Castle Oblivion|the new headquarters]].'' | :*'''{{nihongo|The truth of the Room of Sleep/The New Headquarters|眠りの部屋の真実}}''' - ''[[Xigbar]] discusses with [[Zexion]] the Chamber of Sleep, saying that he eavesdropped on many of the conversations and even heard a voice that differed from Xemnas's once. The scene ends with Xigbar talking about [[Castle Oblivion|the new headquarters]].'' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The melodious nocture, Demyx|夜想のしらべデミックス}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The melodious nocture, Demyx|夜想のしらべデミックス}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Maybe it's Riku?|もしかしてリク?}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Maybe it's Riku?|もしかしてリク?}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the Emperor's side|皇帝のもとへ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|To the Emperor's side|皇帝のもとへ}}''' | ||
:*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo| | :*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo|Identify of the earth sounds|地嗚りの正体}}</font>''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Stormrider comes flying|飛来するストームライダー}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Stormrider comes flying|飛来するストームライダー}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Fireworks|花火}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Fireworks|花火}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Exchanged words of victory|伝えたかった言葉}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Exchanged words of victory|伝えたかった言葉}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the final frontier|最後の地ヘ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|To the final frontier|最後の地ヘ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Organizazion's agenda: Insufficient/The Conclusion|機関の思惑:欠落}}''' - ''Taking place at | :*'''{{nihongo|The Organizazion's agenda: Insufficient/The Conclusion|機関の思惑:欠落}}''' - ''Taking place at '''Where Nothing Gathers''', several Organization members discuss Axel's demise.'' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|The World That Never Was: Where the hearts are|存在しなかった世界:心のゆくえ}}''' | *'''{{nihongo|The World That Never Was: Where the hearts are|存在しなかった世界:心のゆくえ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The land of battle|戦いの地}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The land of battle|戦いの地}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|The moon's dance, Saïx|月に舞う魔人サイクス}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The moon's dance, Saïx|月に舞う魔人サイクス}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|A friend in the heart|心の中の友人}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|A friend in the heart|心の中の友人}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The beginning of everything/Riku Vs. Roxas|すべての始まり}}''' - ''At | :*'''{{nihongo|The beginning of everything/Riku Vs. Roxas|すべての始まり}}''' - ''At '''Memory's Skyscraper''', a battle ensues between [[Riku]] and Roxas, to which Riku is the victor. Upon defeat, [[Ansem the Wise|DiZ]] appears and mocks Roxas's belief of having emotions.'' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|I wanted to see you too|俺ま会いたかったな}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|I wanted to see you too|俺ま会いたかったな}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|A new path|新たな道}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|A new path|新たな道}}''' | ||
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This translation was made by [http://xeeynamo.blogspot.com/2011/07/kingdom-hearts-ii-final-mix.html Xeeynamo] for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.<br> | |||
For the | For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the [[Theater Mode]] page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.<br> | ||
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC) | I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC) | ||
{{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}} | {{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk= | {{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Its a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.}} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text to the new cutscenes (found [http://www.xn--nckg2cq8cvfzf4c.com/kh2/system2.html here]), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand. }} | {{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text next to the new cutscenes (found [http://www.xn--nckg2cq8cvfzf4c.com/kh2/system2.html here]), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand.}} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk= | {{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from [http://pastebin.com/2mkpwf8N here]) and now there are only two things left do to:<br> | ||
# Validate the translation | |||
# Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles.}} |
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This translation was made by Xeeynamo for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.
For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the Theater Mode page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --ShardofTruth 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
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