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! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ||
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*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's first day: The town of twilight|ロクサス第1日:たそがれの街}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Mysterious enemy appears|謎の敵現る}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The cornered enemy|追いつめた敵}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade's appearance|キーブレイド出見}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|A vanishing key|消えゆくカギ}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Photos of memories|思い出の写真}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}''' | |||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's second day: The stirring reality|ロクサス第2日:動き出した現実}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|A dream becoming a key|カギとなる夢}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Always awakening|いつもの目覚め}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Let's go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner and a promise|ハイネと約束}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The story of jobs|バイトの話}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man, again|謎の男、再び}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The vanished munny|消えたマニー}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}''' | |||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's third day: A disconnect|ロクサス第3日:すれ違い}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of an encounter|出会いの夢}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The light of the laboratory|研究所の光}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Illusion awakening|幻の目覚め}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner's left-behind letter|ハイネの置さ手紙}}''' | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}''' | |||
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This translation was made by [http://xeeynamo.blogspot.com/2011/07/kingdom-hearts-ii-final-mix.html Xeeynamo] for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.<br> | |||
For the | For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the [[Theater Mode]] page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.<br> | ||
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so we can | I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC) | ||
{{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}} | |||
{{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Its a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.}} | |||
{{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text next to the new cutscenes (found [http://www.xn--nckg2cq8cvfzf4c.com/kh2/system2.html here]), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand.}} | |||
{{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from [http://pastebin.com/2mkpwf8N here]) and now there are only two things left do to:<br> | |||
# Validate the translation | |||
# Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles.}} |
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This translation was made by Xeeynamo for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.
For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the Theater Mode page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --ShardofTruth 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
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