Forum:KH game idea
On day 2 of my couzins, my brother, and I made a game called Organization Final. Organization Final is a group of powerful nobodies, Some are more powerful than Organization 13 members.
Members of Organization Final
No. I Xobb
No. II Xela
No. III Xaleh
No. IV Leex
No. V Kaxrm
No. VI Laurxa
No. VII Gellax
No. VIII Zipaxz
No. IX Ven Replica
No. X Bethy
No. XI Vaxdis
No. XII Krixen
No. XIII Hoxtams
Kaxrm, Laurxa, Gellax, and Zipaxz want control over O.F., so at the next meeting they banish the other members to the realm of darkness. There is another organization, Organization Infitety(I think that's how it's spelled). O.F. goes on missions, some are to take out O.I. members. Along the way they find out that in the depths of Castle Oblivion heartless made of pure light have harnessed the ability to destroy memorys. O.I. makes a replica of Laurxa. Gellax and Laurxa battle the replica, they win. Zipaxz becomes in charge of the replica program. He makes 3 replicas Naminé, Ventus, and Bob. Zipaxz quits O.F. His replica of Ven becomes a very famous oboe player. On one mission to Castle Oblivion, Gellax and Laurxa find a brainless. Brainless are mutated heartless, of people who where very smart. It is very big and they don't want to battle it so they leave. On their next mission they find it again, but this time they have to battle it. They finish battling it and leave. Later the Organization finds out about the link break. All the members get a second weapon. Laurxa and Kaxrm go to Destiny Islands, and capture Naminé and Roxas. Laurxa becomes able to control somthing called Sensless, the weakest ones look like purple sheep. The Ven Replica is killed by Kaxrm. Laurxa becomes in charge of the replica program. They find out that Naminé and Bob replica were killed. Laurxa creates a new replica of Ven. Kaxrm tells of something called the cleansing where they all go to become more powerful. After the cleansing they attack the O.I stronghold where they find that the leaders and body gaurds are the Oringanal members of O.F. After Kaxrm and Zipaxz attack Xobb, Kaxrm jumps in the way of a magic attack that would of killed Zipaxz reminds him of his promise and tells him to get out of there. He then attacks and apparently kills Xobb. Later as they are escaping they all collapse and each of them is holding a keyblade, then they get their real weopons back and wonder what happened. Then Xobb following suit of final fantasy bosses reapears and then Kaxrm attacks him again. Before they strike they start to fade and Kaxrm crypticly tells them "when we meet again.....dont hold back". Before fading away he strikes Xobb and then dissapears.
The Link Break
The link break is something that will happen if the the balance between light and darkness is upset. If the link break occurs, the weakest nobodies (like organization members not regular ones nobodies) will be killed and all others will be weakened, unless they are a keyblade wielder and they can find the keyblade's true power. It will also kill people who are in between, like Riku. It is unknown what it will do to Xion, some say nothing, others say the same it will do to the nobodies.
We have also written Final Reports, I'll have to ask my couzin if I can post
More about the Members
LAURXA- She often gets in fights with Zipaxz, usually over who should be in charge of the replica program. She has power over sand. Weapon- Light Blue chakrams. Like everyone else once they deafet Xobb can use keyblades. green claymore. Looks: Blonde hair, Blue eyes, Pale white skin. Wears a black coat most of the time, but somtimes she wears green skirt, green jacket, black t-shirt. She always wears a red headband.
ZIPAXZ- Weapon- Pizza,Keyblades Looks: Like axel exept has purple hair Zipaxz's origional self was friends with Xobb's origional self. Zipaxz's origional self was born in Radient Gardens.
KAXRM(pronounced Kaxe-rim)- weapon- Swords that absorb blood,Keyblades. After the takeover was the leader of the organization. Often went on solo missions and even tried to defeat Sora. Extremely powerful and can control Bloodscarce. Can be mysterious and will use others for his own will. His true name is Mark and he was a genaral in the keyblade war. wields the power of blood and fire and can turn into a bloodverse type humanoid. The closest hes had to being touchy to anyone besides hoxtams his nephew was a promise to Zipaxz to protect him. Has strange visions about a man claiming that Kaxrm is "his", and has some connection to axel.
VAXDIS- Weapon: Dark blades. Vaxdis has power over darkness.
XOBB- Weapon: etheral blades
XELA- Weapon: scythe
XALEH- Weapon: shield
LEEX- Weapon: knives
KRIXEN- Weapon: double sided sword power over MONKEYS!
More about the Senseless
The senseless are controlled by Laurxa(Of coarse if you've read the story you know that). All of the sensless look like sheep. Purple sheep have power of flowers, Light blue sheep have power over ice. Dark blue sheep have power over water. Orange sheep have power over lightning. Yellow sheep have power over sand. Green sheep have power over earth. white sheep have power over light.
Comments on This
Does anyone think this would make a good KH game? And please feel free to post any commets( if they're nice).:)
im not gonna start Khruler 15:45, May 30, 2010 (UTC)
What? Is it a bad idea?
Yes i do wanna know why cause im Kaxrm! Hey laurxa made a few tweaks and added my profile. And to the person above me shut up ever heard of having fun? go jump off a cliff.
Hey, It's Laurxa. I corrected the spelling of your name Kaxrm.
well it kinda is im not tryin to be rude if youre thinking that but that's only my opinion Khruler 00:31, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
Hey! It's Laurxa! person who posteed the commet above, SHUT UP! stop posting commets that ar'nt nice, because some of us really like this idea. GOT IT MEMORIZED!
i said that i wasn't trying to be rude oh and that "person who posteed the commet above, SHUT UP!" thing that's not nice Khruler 23:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)
It's Laurxa! Can people please stop posting mean commets.
If you don't have anything nice to post about this, don't post anything at all, because their is a lot of people who really like this idea. And once I had a dream that they made this into a DS game. GOT IT MEMORIZED PEOPLE?!
But people should stop posting rude commets. GOT IT MEMORIZED!? And I have one friend who doesn't really know that much about KH and She likes this idea.
It's Laurxa,Again. I'm sorry for saying shut up, but I only said that once. I'm the one that keeps saying got it memorized. Kaxrm is the one that said to jump of a cliff, not me.
Has everyone stoped posting mean commets? If so thank you people. :)
i love the purple sheep!!!!!!!
Okay guys (I'm not sure which one of you is saying "shut up"), let's all just chill for a second, alright? No one said your idea was stupid (and technically, Pea said "it wasn't interesting"), infact I'm pretty sure that we all think it is very creative. What I think Khruler was getting at was that talking about our own personal Kingdom Hearts fantasies on a fan based forum is somewhat taboo. There's nothing wrong with it, but while we all have our own fantasies and think they are pretty great, we also have our doubts, so we are a bit nervous or uneasy about letting anyone else know about them, simply because we don't want to hear anyone tell us "that's stupid" or "dream on". But when we try to avoid those situations, we eventually end up telling our selves those very words that we don't want to hear. And when we someone else tells us their ideas, because they are not our own or don't make sense acording to our logic, we usually turn them away. But, in that sense, I think that the few people who do share their ideas like you are the really bold ones of these forums, and if you ever have the intention of telling Nomura or anyone else deeply involved in the KH franchise about your ideas, I say go for it, because although it might not get made into a game (few fan-based story requests ever do, although bits and piesces of multiple ones can be worked in, but then it doesn't even resemble any of those ideas at all), I'm sure that Nomura would enjoy learning of someone else's story as well. And if that doesn't work out, there's a;ways FanFiction.net. Either way, don't feel ashamed or insulted or attacked upon, because outspoken examples like these incourage others to do the same. Infact, I might consider putting a thread on my own fantasy and see everyone elses' opinions (but I won't press my luck). One more thing, although "SHUT UP" and "go jump off a cliff" are harsh catch phrases, "Got it memorized" is a total keeper, just don't over do it. AROS 13:45, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
It's Laurxa! How could I send this idea to Nomura? PLEASE TELL ME!!!!!!!!
you could e-mail him probably won't work but give it a shotKhruler 22:43, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
email@example.comKhruler 22:48, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
His that his real e-mail? Or are you joking with me? Can I really trust you?
well that's not HIS e-mail i am a member on Sqare enix.com i get updates on games and i looked at the email just try it Khruler 22:53, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
and if that doesn't work try a nd see if he has a face book pageKhruler 23:27, June 29, 2010 (UTC)
Well, the site's a bit under development, and even though it is asking for contribution, it kind of looses other people's intersets and therefore never updates or expands and thus becomes self destructive. Then again, I could be thinking of a different wikia. Still, point is, ironiclly, the wikia's that don't have much but ask for contributions cause others to lose interset and never help it. But I guess we had to start from somewhere. AROS 22:25, July 2, 2010 (UTC)
I dont like to read useless information So I hated this
AT THE TOP IT SAYS NO MEAN COMMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The idea for this has just been e-mailed!!!
The idea for this is now on the kingdomheartsfanonwikia
Me and Freaky Beserker have been trying to send this idea to Square Enix,but it seems the e-mail we've been given is a fake, so does anyone know how we could send them the idea?--Laurxafinal 22:37, December 1, 2010 (UTC)
So, nobody has any idea how This idea could be sent?--Laurxafinal 19:30, December 5, 2010 (UTC)
Not very helpful, don't have facebook--Laurxafinal 17:44, December 18, 2010 (UTC)
don't have twitter, so, does anyone have anything helpful?--Laurxafinal 00:03, December 27, 2010 (UTC)
Could someone PLEASE help me send the idea?--Laurxafinal 18:00, February 12, 2011 (UTC)
It is on the khfanon wiki. And, can someone PLEASE help. We'll keep asking untill someone does. --Laurxafinal 15:35, 20 March 2011 (EDT)
Sorry to ask again, but does anyone know?? And we do have this on the KHfanon wikia, we even have multiple OF stories(5 total). --Laurxafinal 21:52, 7 June 2011 (EDT)
I didn't like the brainless either(but my brother just had to have them in the story). It's kinda hard at times with there being 9 people helping with the story to write it and it be good, because we all want different stuff in the story. We rarly all aggre on the stuff(especially the 2nd OF where Kaxrm dies). None of us have ever heard of your character Galexgan untill now, so we are not trying to copy or anything. I'm thinking about rewriting the begaining a little to inclue more detail about before the takeover(but it'll stay the same here, just rewriting in on the fanon wikia). And acctually some of the OF characters do have feelings, there a special type of nobody can't remember what their called though(it doesn't say on the fanon wikia, and I'm not the head writer so I don't know everything). Sorry if it seems like we're copying of of someone else's fan fic, but trust me, we're not. We're trying our best to NOT copy. --Laurxafinal 11:42, 9 June 2011 (EDT)
Thanks for saying there's a 7% chance at the moment, that's more than anyone else has said. I'm working on coming up with ideas for when I rewrite it(if the one in charge will let me). --Laurxafinal 19:14, 9 June 2011 (EDT)