Forum:Clumsy writing - help needed!

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KrytenKoro - "It's always best when the other chap is willing to die for his beliefs; you both have the same goal in mind."
Take a look at these:

And I'm sure you'll encounter several other constructions in there that are infuriating, such as "it is worth noting", "it should be noted", "if you look, you can see", "it is important to note", "this is a reference to", and in trivia sections, "granted", "then again", "to be fair", "but still", "however".

Please burn these all with fire.