Forum:Clumsy writing - help needed!

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KrytenKoro - "Punch your lights out, hit the pavement. That's what I call entertainment. Causin' problems makes you famous - all the violence makes a statement." TALK - Take a look at these: [1] "to+note" [2] "important+to" And I'm sure you'll encounter several other constructions in there that are infuriating, such as "it is worth noting", "it should be noted", "if you look, you can see", "it is important to note", "this is a reference to", and in trivia sections, "granted", "then again", "to be fair", "but still", "however". Please burn these all with fire.