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KrytenKoro - "An education was a bit like a communicable sexual disease. It made you unsuitable for a lot of jobs and then you had the urge to pass it on."
Take a look at these:

And I'm sure you'll encounter several other constructions in there that are infuriating, such as "it is worth noting", "it should be noted", "if you look, you can see", "it is important to note", "this is a reference to", and in trivia sections, "granted", "then again", "to be fair", "but still", "however".

Please burn these all with fire.