Editing Talk:Enter the Void

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Points about the draft:
Points about the draft:
*In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks.
*In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks.
*I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability articles).
*I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability sections).
*What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead.  
*What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead.  


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