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Most novels describe what people or places look like when they first appear, so the reader can create an image in his/her head of what the subject looks like. In this novel, the amount of descriptions is varying. One time, it describes a character completely, from hairstyle to clothing, and another time it only says the character is "an old man". In fact, the novel never mentions that Donald is a duck, except for his name, the fact that he is wagging his tail when they first introduce him, him saying "Quack" a lot, and the assumption that everyone knows, or should know, who Donald Duck is.
Most novels describe what people or places look like when they first appear, so the reader can create an image in his/her head of what the subject looks like. In this novel, the amount of descriptions is varying. One time, it describes a character completely, from hairstyle to clothing, and another time it only says the character is "an old man". In fact, the novel never mentions that Donald is a duck, except for his name, the fact that he is wagging his tail when they first introduce him, him saying "Quack" a lot, and the assumption that everyone knows, or should know, who Donald Duck is.


[[File:Deep Jungle KH.png|left|x150px|*&&X%. Friends here.]]
[[File:Maleficent KH.png|left|x200px]]
[[Olympus Coliseum]], [[Halloween Town]], [[Atlantica]], and [[100 Acre Wood]] were all left out of the novel. That's 4 worlds! Not only is this disappointing, but it makes the scene where you first meet [[Maleficent]]'s council very weird, as they (once again) copied the exact conversation from the game. With [[Hades]], [[Oogie Boogie]], and [[Ursula]] missing, it's just a dialogue between [[Jafar]] and [[Hook]]. Surprisingly, [[Deep Jungle]] does appear in the novel, most likely because it teaches Sora the meaning of friendship. (You know, *&&X%. Friends here.)
[[Olympus Coliseum]], [[Halloween Town]], [[Atlantica]], and [[100 Acre Wood]] were all left out of the novel. That's 4 worlds! Not only is this disappointing, but it makes the scene where you first meet [[Maleficent]]'s council very weird, as they (once again) copied the exact conversation from the game. With [[Hades]], [[Oogie Boogie]], and [[Ursula]] missing, it's just a dialogue between [[Jafar]] and [[Hook]]. Surprisingly, [[Deep Jungle]] does appear in the novel, most likely because it teaches Sora the meaning of friendship. (You know, *&&X%. Friends here.)


Of course, the novel has good points, too. For example, they merged the reunion with [[Riku]] in [[Traverse Town]] with the [[Opposite Armor]] battle, which Riku helps Sora defeat. They also managed to add the encounter with the [[Game:Xemnas|Unknown]] into the story!
Of course, the novel has good points, too. For example, they merged the reunion with [[Riku]] in [[Traverse Town]] with the [[Opposite Armor]] battle, which Riku helps Sora defeat. They also managed to add the encounter with the [[Unknown]] into the story!


All in all, it's not a bad book, but it could have been better. What are your thoughts on the novel? Have you read it? Are you planning to? Leave your comments on the talk page!
All in all, it's not a bad book, but it could have been better. What are your thoughts on the novel? Have you read it? Are you planning to? Leave your comments on the talk page!

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