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 The {{nihongo|'''Magnum Loader'''|マグナローダー|Maguna Rōdā|lit. "Magna Roader"}} is an Emblem [[Heartless]] that is found in ''[[Kingdom Hearts II]]''.
 ==Story==
-When [[Sora]] woke up in [[Space Paranoids|a mysterious world]] after [[Master Control Program|Ansem's computer]] "sucks" him in, he found [[Donald Duck|Donald]] and [[Goofy]] captured by several Magnum Loaders.
+After [[Master Control Program|Ansem's computer]] "sucks" him in, Sora wakes up in [[Space Paranoids]], where he finds [[Donald Duck|Donald]] and [[Goofy]] captured by several Magnum Loaders.
-When Sora is forced to play [[Light Cycle|"the game"]], different types of Magnum Loaders with different abilities appear, trying to derezz him.
+When Sora is forced to play [[Light Cycle|the game]], different types of Magnum Loaders with different abilities appear as enemies trying to derezz Sora.
-After the MCP gains control of the Heartless manufacturer, he creates several Heartless that exist in Space Paranoids to attack Hollow Bastion, and some of them are Magnum Loaders. Back in the computer world, more of them attacked [[Tron]], but he was saved by Sora, Donald and Goofy.
+After the MCP gains control of the Heartless manufacturer, he creates several Heartless that exist in the Space Paranoids to attack Hollow Bastion, and some of them are Magnum Loaders. Back in the computer world, several of them attack [[Tron]], but he is saved by Sora, Donald and Goofy.
 ==Design==