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I saw that you were new and wanted to welcome you to, so hi :)--[[User:Somi|♥ Somi ♥]] ([[User talk:Somi|talk]]) | I saw that you were new and wanted to welcome you to, so hi :)--[[User:Somi|♥ Somi ♥]] ([[User talk:Somi|talk]]) | ||
== Real-world locations == | |||
Sorry for the wait. | |||
The main problem with what you were adding is that it was trivia style. Writing what is essentially "this KH location is totally real" does not look professional, and adds no information besides what the existence of the header does. | |||
Secondly, you did ''not'' edit it with references to specific sources, except for the Mulan quote, nor did you follow the comments on the article. Instead of providing actual quotes, you just listed the game that you had claimed the location appeared in, without actually providing the necessary evidence. | |||
Next, Big Ben is not explicitly named in Kingdom Hearts as far as I know, and if you want to claim that it is, you need to provide the source. Simply matching the look of a real-world area isn't enough for this page. | |||
Finally, the journal notes are ''not relevant''. They are clearly presented as non-canon notes so that the player knows where the characters came from. | |||
Since you were making the same mistakes as the first time, you were reverted for the same reasons; that's why we didn't present new ones. | |||
To clarify what should be on the page: | |||
*Coverage of the real-world location's purpose within the plot. | |||
*Full quotes from either the games or official material, properly formatted, which explicitly mention the real-world location.{{User:KrytenKoro/Sig}} 05:47, 10 January 2013 (UTC) | |||