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 ! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix''
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-*'''Roxas's 1st day: Twilight Town'''
+*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's first day: The town of twilight|ロクサス第1日：たそがれの街}}'''
-:*'''Connected dreams'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}'''
-:*'''Walking from the dream'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}'''
-:*'''Something's been stolen'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}'''
-:*'''Versus Seifer'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}'''
-:*'''Mysterious enemies appear'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The Mysterious enemy appears|謎の敵現る}}'''
-:*'''The shadows roaming the forest'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}'''
-:*'''The enemy attacks'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The cornered enemy|追いつめた敵}}'''
-:*'''The Keyblade appears'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade's appearance|キーブレイド出見}}'''
-:*'''The Key vanishes'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|A vanishing key|消えゆくカギ}}'''
-:*'''Photographs of memories'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Photos of memories|思い出の写真}}'''
-:*'''The sunset's radiance'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}'''
-:*'''DiZ and the mysterious man'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}'''
-*'''Roxas's 2nd day: Reality in movement'''
+*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's second day: The stirring reality|ロクサス第2日：動き出した現実}}'''
-:*'''The dream that will become the Key'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|A dream becoming a key|カギとなる夢}}'''
-:*'''The usual awakening'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Always awakening|いつもの目覚め}}'''
-:*'''The mysterious man'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}'''
-:*'''We'll go to the beach!'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Let's go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}'''
-:*'''The promise to Hayner'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner and a promise|ハイネと約束}}'''
-:*'''The story of a party-time job'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The story of jobs|バイトの話}}'''
-:*'''So many memories'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}'''
-:*'''The mysterious man once again'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man, again|謎の男、再び}}'''
-:*'''The munny disappeared'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The vanished munny|消えたマニー}}'''
-:*'''"Can you feel Sora?"'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}'''
-:*'''In the world of darkness'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}'''
-*'''Roxas's 3rd day: Differences'''
+*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's third day: A disconnect|ロクサス第3日：すれ違い}}'''
-:*'''Dream encounter'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of an encounter|出会いの夢}}'''
-:*'''The laboratory's light'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The light of the laboratory|研究所の光}}'''
-:*'''The girl in the white room'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}'''
-:*'''Walking from the illusion'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Illusion awakening|幻の目覚め}}'''
-:*'''The letter Hayner left behind'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner's left-behind letter|ハイネの置さ手紙}}'''
-:*'''Encounter with the girl'''
+:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}'''
-:*'''The road to the mansion'''
+:*
-:*'''The girl disappeared, an enemy appeared'''
-:*'''Decisive battle at the plaza'''
-:*'''The girl's voice'''
-:*'''The station of awakening'''
-:*'''The Keyblade'''
-:*'''The giant looming shadow'''
-:*'''Roxas's victory'''
-:*'''The name is Naminé'''
-:*'''To the original world'''
-:*'''Sorry.'''
-:*'''The promise made yesterday'''
-:*'''Missing'''
-:*'''Uncontrollable factors'''
-*'''Roxas's 4th day: The road to the decisive battle'''
-:*'''Dream of a promise'''
-:*'''Uncertain awakening'''
-:*'''Midsummer struggle battle'''
-:*'''1st match: VS Hayner'''
-:*'''Finish the fight'''
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-Okay, this translation was made by [http://xeeynamo.blogspot.com/2011/07/kingdom-hearts-ii-final-mix.html Xeeynamo ], I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize.<br>
+This translation was made by [http://xeeynamo.blogspot.com/2011/07/kingdom-hearts-ii-final-mix.html Xeeynamo] for his KHIIFM translation patch, I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize. Red lines means that the English translation is even more off than usual.<br>
-For the new cutscenes I took the description and the old title from the [[Theater Mode]] article, but there is still one cutscene missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years?<br>
+For the KHIIFM exclusive cutscenes I took the descriptions and the titles from the [[Theater Mode]] page, but there is at least one missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years? These titles are not part of starrk's translation guide, I think they come from the KH-Vids' youtube videos.<br>
 I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
 {{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}}
-{{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=It's a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.}}
+{{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Its a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.}}
+{{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text next to the new cutscenes (found [http://www.xn--nckg2cq8cvfzf4c.com/kh2/system2.html here]), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand.}}
+{{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from [http://pastebin.com/2mkpwf8N here]) and now there are only two things left do to:<br>
+# Validate the translation
+# Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles.}}