Talk:Ansem the Wise: Difference between revisions

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{{neumannz|time=05:36, April 27, 2010 (UTC)|text=What I mean is that he gained the power of darkness ''first'', and ''then'' he took on the persona of DIZ.}}
{{neumannz|time=05:36, April 27, 2010 (UTC)|text=What I mean is that he gained the power of darkness ''first'', and ''then'' he took on the persona of DIZ.}}
{{KrytenKoro|Neumannz, looking at this page, do you think it satisfactorily covers DiZ's powers over darkness (plot-wise)? If not, what needs to be added?}}
{{KrytenKoro|Neumannz, looking at this page, do you think it satisfactorily covers DiZ's powers over darkness (plot-wise)? If not, what needs to be added?}}
You mean '''Ansem the Wise'''? Well, lessee...
<blockquote>For some time, Ansem remained in the empty realm, constantly writing in order to maintain his sanity. Here, he also discarded his old, stolen name, and became DiZ ("Darkness in Zero"). Eventually, he found a way to escape when he gained the power of darkness, though he did not intend to let himself be consumed by it like his apprentices. With his new found powers, DiZ also garbed himself in a red robe and a mask made of red bandages in order to fully conceal his real identity.</blockquote>
Well, if I remember correctly, Ansem's disguise involved using darkness to change his complexion and hide his beard (was it from an interview?) as opposed to just the bandages. At the very least, the S.A. Report indicates he used darkness. That should be indicated more clearly, I think.
Other than that, I think the "transformation" into DiZ is covered well enough. The rest of the article details what he did as DiZ, so I think it's fine.  --[[User:Neumannz|Neumannz]] 06:04, April 27, 2010 (UTC)


== his name ==
== his name ==
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