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 ''Suna un macc, E ryja culeym canjela, dryd'c fana E kad uhmeha, pid so culeym canjela pucc EC uh '''Easter'''-pnayg jylydeuhc cu E ryja vnaa desa '''XD'''''}}
+===CoM worlds===
+{{HeartlessSlayer| I got a question, not and then I've been seeing that somebody was adding in characters in most of the worlds from KH1 such as Jiminy, Riku and King Mickey. I know that they appeared in the worlds that were in CoM, but the worlds in CoM were technically not real, it was all in Castle Oblivion as illusions. Technically the only worlds that they appeared in that were real were for Jiminy - Disney Castle, Traverse Town and Monstro. Riku - Traverse Town, Agrabah, Monstro, Neverland, Hollow Bastion and End of the World. And for King Mickey, tecnically he only appeared in End of the World. Not trying to cause a fight here but that's just what I honestly think myself. Its like when you view the worlds from the first game, you can see how they're all different. But in CoM, even though they appear as the exact same worlds, but they're all fake, mostly if you pay attention to the room patters when you use the cards in each world. Does that make sense?}}
+==Games and Characters==
+I see CharmedJay just added the games each character appears in. It doesn't look neat tho, how about just adding them as abreviateions (COM, KH, KHII)? --{{User:Yer mom/Sig}} 17:20, December 2, 2009 (UTC)
+The MoS says this: "Do not use abbreviations. Kingdom Hearts II should be written in full, never use KHII or KH2.". So, no, we shouldn't use abbreviations. - '''[[User:LevL|<font face=Century color=maroon>Lev</font>]][[User talk:LevL|<font face=Century color=black>L</font>]]''' 17:22, December 2, 2009 (UTC)
+That part of the MoS refers to the main body of the article, like "Agrabah is a playable world that appears in KH and KHII" but if you notice we do use the oficial abreviations in infoboxes to stop them from looking cramped and ugly... like the gallery looks now >.> --{{User:Yer mom/Sig}} 17:29, December 2, 2009 (UTC)
+== I Need Help! ==
+We are in the cave of wonders ... at the stage where we are suppose to be able to call Abu to assist Aladdin in lowering the next platform, so we can obtain the chest where the protecga chain is then continue on to the next level.
+We have tried calling Abu many times, leaving, going in and out and all we see is "no response" and nothing happens .. we are unable to get to the next stage of the game and we need a little help .. so please anyone .. can you let us know what to do.
+dragonskeeper77@gmail.com
+Subject line Kingdomhearts
+Thank you,
+The Princesses of Castle Love
+==Unclear note==
+The KH treasure list states ''In the Bottomless Hall, you have to take the entrance inside the Entrance area''. Which entrance is this ? Shouldn't it be "To the right of the Entrance area" or something like that ? {{User:Troisnyxetienne/Signature}} 09:08, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
+==Data, data, data and the Genie==
+The coded paragraph really overuses the word "data", wouldn't it be easier to state which are the real persons? Also, I don't know if we prefer "Genie" or "the Genie" here. Both forms are correct (because it's the name and the description), but the Wikia article defintely uses "the Genie" more often. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 01:25, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
+:Yeah, there's definitely too much "data". Considering the game itself uses the term maybe three times, total, we shouldn't need to use it every time. Hopefully my changes work. Regarding Genie, I might be wrong, but I think he gets referred to as "Genie" in conversation.  --{{User:Neumannz/SigTemplate}} 04:18, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
+== kh2 story error ==
+the Kingdom Hearts 2 section mistakenly says that jafar is ordering Aladdin to give him the lamp in a vision when that is instead meant to be a flashback. it also neglects to mention that the organization 13 help the peddler retrieve the lamp. - kkoro
+== Carpet ride room ==
+I can't find the name of this room in the list of [http://kh-vids.net/threads/kingdom-hearts-ntsc-u-c-codes.43515/page-159 hacked rooms]. Does anyone with hacking experience know anything about that short segment?{{User:KrytenKoro/Sig}} 15:12, 28 March 2016 (UTC)
+{{OpenTalk}}
+== Story Section ==
+I'm no good at telling what should or shouldn't be in a story section but I'm wondering: does the story section for KHUX and 358/2 Days on this page really need to be as long as it is? - [[User:JTD95|JTD95]] ([[User talk:JTD95|talk]]) 10:26, 17 March 2019 (UTC)
+:So, the scope of the wiki is basically: every scene should be ''summarized'' to communicate the purpose of the scene.
+:A ''lot'' of this is script regurgitation, though. Ex:
+::Player makes contact with Jafar, who sends them out in search of a fragment of the golden scarab. After retrieving it, Player and Chirithy wait to meet Jafar in the desert, where Chirithy voices his distrust of Jafar and wonders if they should have told Aladdin before getting involved with him. When Jafar arrives, he unites the two fragments and follows the flying the golden scarab to the Cave of Wonders. Jafar orders Player to fetch the lamp from within, but before they can, the Cave of Wonders Guardian iterates that only the "diamond in the rough" may enter, casting Player out into the desert in the process. Iago collects the fragments and expresses his frustrations, while Jafar encourages patience as they prepare to seek out the "diamond in the rough". With Chirithy proven right, Player decides to check in on Aladdin.
+:Turn this to:
+::The Player encounters Jafar, who sends them to search for a piece of the [[golden scarab]]. Once it's found, the Player meets Jafar in the desert, despite Chirithy's misgivings, where they use the scarab to locate the [[Cave of Wonders]]. However, the Player is not able to retrieve the lamp for Jafar from within the cave, as it will only accept entry by the "diamond in the rough". Jafar and Iago return to Agrabah with the scarab to search for the proper chump, while the Player goes to check on Aladdin.
+:"diamond in the rough" would not be script regurgitation here, as that specific phrasing is an important plot point that is remarked upon multiple times.
+:This:
+::Aladdin encounters a disguised Jasmine being attacked by Bandits. Aladdin and Abu save Jasmine, but the Bandits keep pursuing her and force them to retreat. Meanwhile, Jafar and Iago utilize the Sands of Time to discern the identity of the "diamond in the rough", which is revealed to be Aladdin. Once safe, Aladdin brings Jasmine to his home and shows her his view of the palace. When Jasmine seems disinterested, he asks where Jasmine comes from, but she evades the question and tells him that her father is forcing her to get married. Just then, the Guards find Aladdin and apprehend him, prompting Jasmine to reveal herself as the princess and order for Aladdin's release. However, the Guards inform her that their orders come from Jafar, and Jasmine must speak with him about Aladdin's release.
+:could become:
+::Meanwhile, Aladdin has run into a disguised Jasmine, and helps her escape from a pack of [[Bandit]]s back to his house. Jafar and Iago magically observe the rescue, identifying Aladdin as the patsy they need. The palace guards interrupt as Aladdin and Jasmine are getting to know each other, having been sent by Jafar to arrest Aladdin, and in the clamor Aladdin discovers that Jasmine is the kingdom's princess.
+:I don't recall if "Sands of Time" is actually mentioned in KHUX, so I left that out. If it is, mention it.
+::Honestly, the KHUX section is almost a straight retread of the movie, so the wikipedia article on the movie could be used as a helpful guide to trimming this up.{{User:KrytenKoro/Sig}} 15:29, 18 March 2019 (UTC)