Forum:Clumsy writing - help needed!

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KrytenKoro - "Space Corp Directive 195—In an emergency power situation, a hologrammatic crew member must lay down his life in order that the living crew members might survive."  "Yes, but Rimmer Directive 271 states just as clearly: 'No chance, you metal bastard.'" TALK - Take a look at these: [1] "to+note" [2] "important+to" And I'm sure you'll encounter several other constructions in there that are infuriating, such as "it is worth noting", "it should be noted", "if you look, you can see", "it is important to note", "this is a reference to", and in trivia sections, "granted", "then again", "to be fair", "but still", "however". Please burn these all with fire.