User talk:KrytenKoro/Archive 12: Difference between revisions

KrytenKoro, I noticed that a few hours ago you reverted an edit I made to the Story and Design sections of the article on the Ruler of the Sky. I wish to explain some of the reasoning behind what I was trying to accomplish with my edit. If you reexamine my edit, you will find that the "pertinent info on Pete" was not deleted, merely placed after the information on Hook and Smee. I noticed that the previous version confused the ordering of events in Mission 78: although Pete appears after Hook releases the Ruler of the Sky during the mission, the previous version mentions Pete arriving "as Roxas arrives in Neverland". My objective was to reword the paragraph to provide a more logical ordering in the context of the mission. I recognize that this is a relatively minor thing to discuss; nevertheless, I hope you will give my reasons your careful consideration, and I thank you for your edit summary.