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You are right; I corrected the previous edit according to your suggestion. By any chance, would you be okay with using the talk page to communicate in the future? I don't think it best to continue deliberating via edit summaries.

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 ==Story==
 ===''Kingdom Hearts 358/2 Days''===
-As Roxas arrives at Neverland, [[Pete]] shows up and brags about his plans for a Heartless army, and threatens to have his Heartless gobble Roxas up for interfering at [[Agrabah]]. Soon, [[Captain Hook]] and [[Mr. Smee]] finally dig up a treasure chest along with a giant bird skull and a golden sword. Just as Pete had been planning, the darkness of Hook's greed summons a Heartless in the form of that treasure, and the pirates flee. Roxas is forced to fight the risen Heartless, and eventually defeats it in an aerial battle. As the Heartless fades, it plummets into the Pirate Ship, destroying it, then releases its captive heart.
+Soon after Roxas arrives at Neverland, he encounters Captain Hook and Mr. Smee, who finally dig up a treasure chest along with a giant bird skull and a golden sword. The darkness of Hook's greed summons a Heartless in the form of that treasure, and the pirates flee. As Roxas prepares to battle the Heartless, Pete shows up and brags about his plans for a Heartless army, and threatens to have his Heartless gobble Roxas up for interfering at Agrabah. Roxas is forced to fight the risen Heartless, and eventually defeats it in an aerial battle.  As the Heartless fades, it plummets into the Pirate Ship, destroying it, then releases its captive heart.
 ==Design==