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 ==Design==
-The Gatling Ship's head is small in comparison to the rest of its body, blue, and has a yellow spike on its back. Its face is adorned with a white cross resembling the top half of the Nobody symbol. Its arms are enormous, silver, and cylindrical with concave sides and blue ends. The front ends of its arms are wider than the back, have small black vents lining their edges, and have short, blue, triple-barreled rotating guns mounted on them.
+The Gatling Ship's head, blue with a yellow spike on its back, is small in comparison to the rest of its body. Its face is adorned with a white cross resembling the top half of the Nobody symbol. Its arms are enormous, silver, and cylindrical with concave sides and blue ends. The front ends of its arms are wider than its back ends and have small black vents lining their edges. The arms have short, blue, triple-barreled rotating guns mounted on them.
-The Gatling Ship's name references its massive guns, which resemble [[Wikipedia:Gatling gun|gatling guns]].
+The Gatling Ship's name is a reference to [[Wikipedia:Gatling gun|gatling guns]] which the ship's firearms resemble.
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