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*In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks. | *In the lead, I don't think "Mickey Mouse Club March" needs to be in quotation marks. | ||
*I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability | *I think that the Appearance section should be written in a bulleted list instead of prose (think "Learning" sections of ability articles). | ||
*What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead. | *What's the distinction between the "Summary" and "Details" sections? My thoughts are all musical technical information should be in a "Composition" section and any information to do with artists, origin and etymology should just be in the lead. | ||
With the infobox, I vote no to having images. World and game logos are images that doesn't actually represent the article's topic and they'd be inconsistent between articles since some have world icons, others would have game logos and the rest would have album cover images. Instead, the .ogg files can go in the space where we put images.}} | With the infobox, I vote no to having images. World and game logos are images that doesn't actually represent the article's topic and they'd be inconsistent between articles since some have world icons, others would have game logos and the rest would have album cover images. Instead, the .ogg files can go in the space where we put images.}} | ||