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 ==Story==
 ===''Kingdom Hearts χ''===
-The world became known as the Keyblade Graveyard once the five [[Union]]s clashed over the [[Lux]] due to [[Luxu]]'s manipulations. Now a barren wasteland littered with the Keyblades of the dead, it remained silent and empty for centuries.
+<!--This section should ONLY BE what is in the game, present tense, in-universe
-The unnamed Keyblade wielder collapses in the crossroads formed by the Keyblades, dying once the war is complete; however, it was later revealed to be a dream.
+This is not a full and accurate relation of events -- include info on how the place was chosen, the premonition the Player had, the actual events of the battle, and Ephemer showing up, then how Chirithy (SPECIFY WHO REVEALS THESE THINGS GUYS) points out to the Player it was a dream
-===Before ''Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep''===
+The Player collapses in the crossroads formed by the Keyblades, passing out at the completion of the war once the war is complete; however, it was later revealed to be a dream.
-Master Xehanort brought Ventus here to train him in using darkness. To this end, he summoned Neoshadows to attack him. However, Ventus proved too scared to use his darkness. Angered, Xehanort used his Keyblade to rip the darkness out of Ventus, turning it into Vanitas, his new apprentice. With Ventus now dying due to the strain of having his heart damaged like that, Xehanort decided to leave him at Destiny Islands to pass away in peace.
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+===Between ''Kingdom Hearts χ'' and ''Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep''===
+The world became known as the Keyblade Graveyard once the five [[Union]]s clashed over the [[Lux]] due to [[Luxu]]'s manipulations. Now a barren wasteland littered with the Keyblades of the dead, it remained silent and empty for centuries.{{?}}<!--cute down on the purple prose a tad--><!--THE WHOLE BIT ABOUT HOW THE WAR WAS FOUGHT HERE-->
+In order to strengthen the darkness within Ventus, Master Xehanort brought his apprentice to the graveyard and set Neoshadows on him. However, Ventus was unwilling to rely on his darkness, so Xehanort used his Keyblade to split the darkness from Ventus, creating Vanitas. The procedure mortally injured Ventus's heart, so Xehanort took him to his past home at the Destiny Islands to allow Ventus to expire in peace.{{fact}}<!--add cites-->
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+<><><> Flashback: Vanitas's Making <><><>
+(Neoshadows are surrounding Ven in the Badlands. Ven looks around at them,
+afraid.)
+Ven: Please don't do this, Master. I'm not strong enough.
+Xehanort: No. It is because you are trying to hold it in. Let the dark impulses
+waken in the pit of your heart. Release them, here and now! Sharpen your fear
+into rage.
+(More Neoshadows appear.)
+Xehanort: You must! If you do not let the storm within you run its course, it
+will wipe you from the face of the world, make no mistake!
+(The Neoshadows move toward Ven.)
+Xehanort: Do it. Embrace the darkness. Produce for your Master the X-blade!
+(The Neoshadows attack Ven. When they leave Ven lays face down in the dirt.
+Master Xehanort walks over to him.)
+Xehanort: Really? You would rather die than use the power? Feckless neophyte.
+(He places his foot on Ven and rolls him onto his back.)
+Xehanort: If I must... I will extract the darkness from within you myself.
+(Master Xehanort summons his Keyblade and holds it over Ven's heart. A beam
+shoots from it to Ven's heart, causing a piece of it to be unlocked and
+extracted. It rises into the air where it is surrounded with darkness. After
+the darkness fades from around it we see Vanitas where the heart fragment was.
+Ven's eyes glaze over and Vanitas floats down and lands next to him.)
+Xehanort: Empty creature from Ventus riven...to you, the name Vanitas shall be
+given.
+Vanitas: Yes, Master.
+-->
 ===''Kingdom Hearts Birth by Sleep''===