Talk:Wonderland

since the lost boys are gonna be in bbs ud think other chracters from other worlds we haventseen like the catterpillar should be in upcoming games.

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Whoever last edited this page did a...bad job. It's way to theatrical and not informational which is not what a wikia is about, Things such as adding exclamation marks, (...), and just overall trying to add emotion or story to this page is just not right. - friend

Like mentioned in my message on the Wonderland discussion board, someone is adding unnecessary emotion into the text. Whoever is editing these world profiles and giving them things like exclamation marks and (...) make it seem like they are taking the Kingdom Hearts storyline and making a terribly written fanfiction. - Friend of Nomura

No, it was right. If you look at any other world page, the story sections are written the exact same way. I suggest that you stop changing the page. Now.

what makes you think it's right?

Every other world page has the story section like that. Leave it the way it is.

Don't make kingdom hearts sound like a stupid kids game....

Or like little kids run this wikia..

Nobody else had a problem with the article until you came along. and, for the record, it is a kid's game, but is extremely far from stupid. And there are full-grown adults who run this wiki. Why not take this up with them?

1) not a kids game, 2)it is the greatest game ever made 3) it just looks and sounds bad and I ndon't really know how Nomura would act to this..

1)was originally aimed at children, adults and teenagers enjoy the game as well. 2)yes, it is a great game, 3)Tetsuya Nomura has nothing to do with this wiki, and nobody else thinks it sounds bad.

All right, that's enough. You two stop having his arguement before it turns into something much worst. Anonymous, you must respect the way we run the wiki. Mister KKDS have been on the wiki longer, so he knows what he is doing.-- Ninja Sheik  02:34, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Idk what else to say, except it just looks like a bad fan fiction taken directly from the plot already place down. "I hold the blade,my proof of kingship..."

Thank you, Lady NinjaSheik.

Ok. Argument resolves nothing anyway Peace.

No problem. Now if you will excuse me, I must get back to writing my Gargoyles story.-- Ninja Sheik  02:38, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Just a moment. Articles on the wiki should be written without unnecessary emotion, and exclaimation points should basically never be used. Let it be known, however, that you are in no way being helpful, anon. If you aren't happy with the way something it is written, then reword the sentences so they don't have unnecessary emotion. Don't harass the user who took the time to get the information here, and NEVER put a personal message on an article. That is far more childish that a few exclaimation points. We apprectiate your love of the series and desire to better the articles, but complaining and belittling other users doesn't accomplish anything.-- Lapis of the Night  02:44, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well, i guess that makes sense. It's just that all of the pages have the same style for the story sections in Kingdom Hearts 358/2 days. I just assumed that they were supposed to be like that. my bad.

It's fine, it's probably because the same person wrote the section (which, I have to point out again to the anon, took a great deal of effort). We just need to reword the sections a bit.-- Lapis of the Night  02:50, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I only did that to draw attention to the discussion board here, i tried doing that but a moment later it had been edited back to the way it was. I was trying to help, even if my words did not come out in that way. Forgive me.

Again, it's fine so long as it doesn't happen again. Like I said before, we always appreciate and welcome contributors that want to help.-- Lapis of the Night  02:54, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well I am about to publish a book, and I've gone through a lot of grammatical mistakes, and it irritates me to see these things (probably thanks to my OCD) If you need my help, I will be joining the wikia tonight, and I will always be at your call.

- Jake

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