User talk:73.87.70.10

Script regurgitation
your edit has a lot of overt script regurgitation, where you're essentially repeating the lines the characters used instead of providing a synopsis. Please remember that synopsis sections should focus on the import and meaning of the scenes, not the lines and stage directions. When in doubt, think to yourself how Jiminy would write the sections. 15:16, 12 February 2019 (UTC)