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! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ! style="width:20em; text-align:left" | ''Kingdom Hearts II Final Mix'' | ||
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| colspan="2" | | | colspan="2" | | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 1st day: Twilight Town|ロクサス第1日:たそがれの街}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Connected dreams|つながる夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Waking from the dream|夢からの目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|What was stolen?|盜まれた何か}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Versus Seifer|サイファー登場}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Mysterious enemies appear|謎の敵現る}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The shadows roaming the forest|森をさまよう影}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The enemy attacks|追いつめた敵}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade | :*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade appears|キーブレイド出見}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|The Key vanishes|消えゆくカギ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Photographs of memories|思い出の写真}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The sunset's radiance|夕日のまぶしさ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|DiZ and the mysterious man|ディズと謎の男}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 2nd day: Reality in movement|ロクサス第2日:動き出した現実}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|The dream that will become the Key|カギとなる夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|The usual awakening|いつもの目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man|謎の男}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|We'll go to the beach!|海へ行こう!}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner | :*'''{{nihongo|The promise to Hayner|ハイネと約束}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The story of | :*'''{{nihongo|The story of a party-time job|バイトの話}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|So many memories|たくさんの思い出}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man | :*'''{{nihongo|The mysterious man once again|謎の男、再び}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The munny disappeared|消えたマニー}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|"Can you feel Sora?"|「ソラを感じているか?」}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|In the world of darkness|暗闇の世界で}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's | *'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 3rd day: Differences|ロクサス第3日:すれ違い}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream | :*'''{{nihongo|Dream encounter|出会いの夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The light | :*'''{{nihongo|The laboratory's light|研究所の光}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl in the white room|白い部屋の少女}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Walking from the illusion|幻の目覚め}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Hayner | :*'''{{nihongo|The letter Hayner left behind|ハイネの置さ手紙}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Encounter with the girl|少女との出会い}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The road to the mansion|屋敷への道}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl disappeared, an enemy appeared|消えた少女、現れた敵}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Decisive battle at the plaza|広場での決戦}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The girl's voice|少女の声}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Station of Awakening|目覚めの園}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The Station of Awakening|目覚めの園}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Keyblade|キーブレード}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The Keyblade|キーブレード}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The giant looming shadow|迫り来る巨大な影}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's victory|ロクサスの勝利}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The name is Naminé|その名はナミネ}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Sorry...|ごめん…}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The promise made yesterday|昨日交わした約束}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo| | :*'''{{nihongo|Missing|すれちがい}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Uncontrollable factors|制御できない要素}}''' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the decisive battle|ロクサス第4日:決戦の道}}''' | |||
*'''{{nihongo|Roxas's 4th day: The road to the | |||
:*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Dream of a promise|約束の夢}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Uncertain awakening|浮かない目覚め}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Their goal is...|彼らの目的は…}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Their goal is...|彼らの目的は…}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Organization XIII gathering|XIII機関集結}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Organization XIII gathering|XIII機関集結}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Organization's agenda: The hero of light/The Plans|機関の思惑:光の勇者}}''' - ''At the [[Castle That Never Was]], in '''Where Nothing Gathers''', several Organization members discuss [[Sora|the Keyblade master]]. Showing promise, [[Xemnas]] orders the other members to pursue Sora.'' | :*'''{{nihongo|The Organization's agenda: The hero of light/The Plans|機関の思惑:光の勇者}}''' - ''At the [[Castle That Never Was]], in |}}'''Where Nothing Gathers|}}''', several Organization members discuss [[Sora|the Keyblade master]]. Showing promise, [[Xemnas]] orders the other members to pursue Sora.'' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|Beast's Castle 1: The Beast's dilemma|ビーストキャッスル1:ビーストの異変}}''' | *'''{{nihongo|Beast's Castle 1: The Beast's dilemma|ビーストキャッスル1:ビーストの異変}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The voice echoing in the castle|城に響く声}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The voice echoing in the castle|城に響く声}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|"Everybode. Hang in there!"|仲間のもとへ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|"Everybode. Hang in there!"|仲間のもとへ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Sorry, your highness!|王様、ごめん!}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Sorry, your highness!|王様、ごめん!}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the hidden stage/An Old Friend|隠された舞台へ}}''' - ''An unknown figure clad in an Organization XIII cloak enters '''Ansem's Study''' and downloads data from the computer to a disc. After obtaining the data, the unknown figure heads under the '''Heartless Manufactory''' to the [[Chambers of Repose and Waking|Chamber of Repose]], where he greets an "old friend". | :*'''{{nihongo|To the hidden stage/An Old Friend|隠された舞台へ}}''' - ''An unknown figure clad in an Organization XIII cloak enters |}}'''Ansem's Study|}}''' and downloads data from the computer to a disc. After obtaining the data, the unknown figure heads under the |}}'''Heartless Manufactory|}}''' to the [[Chambers of Repose and Waking|Chamber of Repose]], where he greets an "old friend". | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The truth of the Room of Sleep/The New Headquarters|眠りの部屋の真実}}''' - ''[[Xigbar]] discusses with [[Zexion]] the Chamber of Sleep, saying that he eavesdropped on many of the conversations and even heard a voice that differed from Xemnas's once. The scene ends with Xigbar talking about [[Castle Oblivion|the new headquarters]].'' | :*'''{{nihongo|The truth of the Room of Sleep/The New Headquarters|眠りの部屋の真実}}''' - ''[[Xigbar]] discusses with [[Zexion]] the Chamber of Sleep, saying that he eavesdropped on many of the conversations and even heard a voice that differed from Xemnas's once. The scene ends with Xigbar talking about [[Castle Oblivion|the new headquarters]].'' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The melodious nocture, Demyx|夜想のしらべデミックス}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The melodious nocture, Demyx|夜想のしらべデミックス}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Maybe it's Riku?|もしかしてリク?}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Maybe it's Riku?|もしかしてリク?}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the Emperor's side|皇帝のもとへ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|To the Emperor's side|皇帝のもとへ}}''' | ||
:*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo| | :*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo|Identity of the earth sounds|地嗚りの正体}}</font>''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Stormrider comes flying|飛来するストームライダー}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Stormrider comes flying|飛来するストームライダー}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Fireworks|花火}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Fireworks|花火}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Arrival at the central computer core|システム中枢到着}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Arrival at the central computer core|システム中枢到着}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Crash, commander Sark|激突、サーク司令官}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Crash, commander Sark|激突、サーク司令官}}''' | ||
:*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo|All of the functions | :*'''<font color="red">{{nihongo|All of the functions will|すべての機能を}}</font>''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The MCP's breakdown|MCP崩壊}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The MCP's breakdown|MCP崩壊}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Hollow Bastion's restoration|ホロウバスティオンの復活}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Hollow Bastion's restoration|ホロウバスティオンの復活}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Exchanged words of victory|伝えたかった言葉}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Exchanged words of victory|伝えたかった言葉}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|To the final frontier|最後の地ヘ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|To the final frontier|最後の地ヘ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The Organizazion's agenda: Insufficient/The Conclusion|機関の思惑:欠落}}''' - ''Taking place at '''Where Nothing Gathers''', several Organization members discuss Axel's demise.'' | :*'''{{nihongo|The Organizazion's agenda: Insufficient/The Conclusion|機関の思惑:欠落}}''' - ''Taking place at |}}'''Where Nothing Gathers|}}''', several Organization members discuss Axel's demise.'' | ||
*'''{{nihongo|The World That Never Was: Where the hearts are|存在しなかった世界:心のゆくえ}}''' | *'''{{nihongo|The World That Never Was: Where the hearts are|存在しなかった世界:心のゆくえ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The land of battle|戦いの地}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The land of battle|戦いの地}}''' | ||
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:*'''{{nihongo|Protagonists together|集結した主役たち}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Protagonists together|集結した主役たち}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|DiZ's truth|ディズの真実}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|DiZ's truth|ディズの真実}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The free shooter, Xigbar|魔弾の射手シクバール}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Friends at the origin!|仲間のもとへ!}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Friends at the origin!|仲間のもとへ!}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Completely full Kingdom Hearts|満たされしキングダムハーツ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Completely full Kingdom Hearts|満たされしキングダムハーツ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|This isn't a dream...|夢じゃない…}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|This isn't a dream...|夢じゃない…}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Ansem the Wise's gamble|賢者アンセムの賭け}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Ansem the Wise's gamble|賢者アンセムの賭け}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The | :*'''{{nihongo|The gambler of fate, Luxord|運命を賭す者ルクソード}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The battle's outcome|戦いの結果}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The battle's outcome|戦いの結果}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Road opened|開かれる道}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Road opened|開かれる道}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The moon's dance, Saïx|月に舞う魔人サイクス}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The moon's dance, Saïx|月に舞う魔人サイクス}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|A friend in the heart|心の中の友人}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|A friend in the heart|心の中の友人}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The beginning of everything/Riku Vs. Roxas|すべての始まり}}''' - ''At '''Memory's Skyscraper''', a battle ensues between [[Riku]] and Roxas, to which Riku is the victor. Upon defeat, [[Ansem the Wise|DiZ]] appears and mocks Roxas's belief of having emotions.'' | :*'''{{nihongo|The beginning of everything/Riku Vs. Roxas|すべての始まり}}''' - ''At |}}'''Memory's Skyscraper|}}''', a battle ensues between [[Riku]] and Roxas, to which Riku is the victor. Upon defeat, [[Ansem the Wise|DiZ]] appears and mocks Roxas's belief of having emotions.'' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|I wanted to see you too|俺ま会いたかったな}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|I wanted to see you too|俺ま会いたかったな}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|A new path|新たな道}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|A new path|新たな道}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Farewell, King|さらば王よ}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Farewell, King|さらば王よ}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Wriggling | :*'''{{nihongo|Wriggling heartless|うごめくハートレス}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|In the original form|もとの姿に}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|In the original form|もとの姿に}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Maleficent and Pete's | :*'''{{nihongo|Maleficent and Pete's heart|マレフィセント、ピートの心}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|Xemnas's question|ゼムナスの問い}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|Xemnas's question|ゼムナスの問い}}''' | ||
:*'''{{nihongo|The skyscraper's decisive battle|摩天楼の決戦}}''' | :*'''{{nihongo|The skyscraper's decisive battle|摩天楼の決戦}}''' | ||
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Okay, this translation was made by [http://xeeynamo.blogspot.com/2011/07/kingdom-hearts-ii-final-mix.html Xeeynamo], I made some minor corrections, but neither Xeeynamo nor I are native English speakers, so there is obviously still a lot to correct and standardize.<br> | |||
For the | For the new cutscenes I took the description and the old title from the [[Theater Mode]] article, but there is still one cutscene missing, which is rather strange. Did we forget about it all these years?<br> | ||
I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC) | I'll try to contact Xeeynamo so hopefully we can get the original Japanese titles too. --[[User:ShardofTruth|ShardofTruth]] 00:49, 5 January 2012 (UTC) | ||
{{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}} | {{Asif|sho=Hold on, what exactly is it that you want done? Do you want the titles proofread? The descriptions added? (Probably) both?}} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk= | {{ShardofTruth|time=02:06, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=It's a bit complicated I guess. The reason I didn't put the titles directly on the Theater Mode page is because the translation appears to be very clumsy. Proofreading and grammatical improvements would indeed help a lot. But I fear we might deviate from the original Japanese text too much, that's why I'm looking for the original script and this is kind of an open project now. I don't know if descriptions of the cuscenes are necessary at all.}} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text | {{ShardofTruth|time=19:05, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I added the Japanese original text to the new cutscenes (found [http://www.xn--nckg2cq8cvfzf4c.com/kh2/system2.html here]), even the three that were forgotten by starrk's translation guide all those years ago and nobody cared about. I haven't got a reply from Xeeynamo yet, but I could make screenshots of all cutscenes. But the font of KH2 is horrible, so it has to be translated by hand. }} | ||
{{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from [http://pastebin.com/2mkpwf8N here]) and now there are only two things left do to:<br> | {{ShardofTruth|time=23:50, 5 January 2012 (UTC)|talk=Okay, I updated the titles with their Japanese names (taken from [http://pastebin.com/2mkpwf8N here]) and now there are only two things left do to:<br> | ||
1. Validate the translation<br> | |||
2. Check the spelling, grammar and coherence (Kingdom Hearts terms) of the titles<br>.}} |